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Here's a humourous first offering to Poet's Corner from a Rhondda gentleman. 

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"To Pee or Not To Pee"
 

When I look out my window what do you think I see
One of those new toilets in which you put ten pee
 
It looks just like the Tardis that's used by Dr Who
But I saw it put there so I know it is a loo
 
No one will ever use it I mentioned to the bloke
It's alright in a hurry but no good if you're broke
 
The people who try to use it do they really care
For all we ever see them do, is Stop and Stand and Stare
 
When they try to use it the red lights always on
In the age of the computer where are the old loo's gone
 
The man he comes to fix it the green lights on once more
But soon it turns to red again as he goes through the door
 
The vandals have a field day they jump on it and shout
They're banging on the door at night to get the money out
 
Looking out my window I might shout out with glee
They've taken it at last that concrete monstrosity
 

by "Mr. Mushnick"

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