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Here's a remarkable first offering to Poet's Corner from a young Llwynypia lad - written in the year 2000 - when he was just 10 years old. 6666666666666666666 The
Memory of a Soldier. It was the 11th
hour, of the 11th day, of the 11th month My uncle came
around Sensibly he
gathered the family This was
unusual – he wasn’t usually sensible “I’ll
tell you a story.” he said He started
his invisible journey to his past Of a painful,
horrible and terrible memory “I probably
would be dead if it wasn’t for my mate Bill He shot the
man who almost had me For he shot
him in the mouth His tongue
hung on his chin terribly. I couldn’t
leave him there. I tried to be
helpful by simply taking him in my arms I felt him
tremble – It was too late for the sufferer of war. I heard a
noise. It was a
voice. A wonderful
feeling ran through me. “We’ve
won - the war’s over!” a crowd shouted in joy. The sight of
them laughing and hearing their cheers was beautiful. Suddenly I
looked at the dead boy. I think he
was just a teenager His young
life was grasped away from him. This I found
hard to handle. So I hope you
can recognise what this day means. So many
suffered for us And some
against But a man is
a man Sides don’t
matter when people die I was nearly
one of them And even
though that man tried to kill me The sight of
him still runs in my mind. I wish I
could go back and stop him from dying Without
killing myself.” 55555555555555555555555555 *Treorchy.net sends thanks to Rhys for sharing such a terrific insight - and many thanks to your grandmother (Mrs. Hopes of Dumfries Street) for sending it in to us on your behalf.and if anyone else would like to contribute to our poet's corner then e-mail your unpublished work to news@Treorchy.net **Treorchy.net reserves the right to illustrate any submissions - copyright of all poetry remains with the authors and should not be reproduced in any form without prior permission. |